20th November

Today we have been talking about the dialogue scenes we are going to add in between the dances because we feel like at the moment we don't have enough dialogue scenes. We were originally going to have the first scene in a coffee shop but we decided to change it to a train station because we feel like there's more the background civilian characters around can talk about, for example 'the trains always late' and so on. We also started talking about the dialogue for an interrogation scene but we got sidetracked by the train station scene. This is important because it means we have more room and slightly more freedom for general chit chat of the civilian characters. The train station scene is meant to let the audience know what kind of world we are in i.e. the future where holograms exsist and it also introduces the Paradise in the advertisement. We want audiences to instantly understand that we're not in the world we live in and that things are fairly different. We need more dialogue because at the moment we've only got dance pieces and while we understand what is going on in each of them the audience might not without some expositional dialogue.